“I ‘m sorry”, the Doctor surrendered.
Nurses started dismantling the life support. He waited
breathlessly for the heartbeat graph to fall flat. Finally, she would be all
his.
She saw her tall dark man. She had spent sleepless
nights with him, crying, confronting, judging if their relationship would
ever work out. It was hatred to begin with. But slowly, she started trusting him. She knew he could provide her with peace like none other.
Whilst she was preparing to move out of the hospital
with him, she heard a deep male voice calling her name.
She started breathing again, while Death stood there watching
their four years of courtship collapse.
sudden, short, and...sharp.
ReplyDeleteTor bhalo legeche? Yay!!!!
DeleteI think this is a brilliant story, and is good enough to win the contest.
ReplyDeleteComing from you, well, I am happy already! Doesn't matter if I win or LOOSE. :D
Deleteloose??????
DeleteAbhijeet, it is a private joke that Mr. Mukherjee and I share :D
DeleteIn case you want to read this one: http://ovshake.blogspot.in/2013/02/the-error.html
excellent, Parama. one of the best entries i've dug my eyes onto for this contest. why don't you write more fiction? :-)
ReplyDelete~ Best,
How sweet is that! Thank you so much. Gives me a lot of moral boost!
Deleteexcellent, Parama. one of the best entries i've dug my eyes onto for this contest. why don't you consider writing more fiction? :-)
ReplyDelete~ Best,
This is superb.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Dip-tea.
DeleteA wonderful read.
ReplyDeleteThoughtful.
Deep.
As deep as the sound that brought her back from her tall dark man.
:)
Write on..
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I love you Banhea. :)
DeleteNice one! I would like to vote for you. :)
ReplyDeleteYay!!! So happy I am. Thank you, Supriya. Thanks a ton.
Deletegreat one!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Soumya.
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