“Terribly tiny tales” had invited guest story tellers for writing a tale on Freedom for their 15th August
feature. The following were the guidelines:-
1.
Must be a story within 140 characters (including
spaces).
2.
Must not be an abstract musing or poem.
3.
Must convey a passage of time.
4.
Must have a beginning and an end.
5.
Must include a character – could be
anything from a cat to a letterbox.
6.
Must include the word freedom in the story.
7. May
not be about India or the freedom struggle or patriotism but about freedom in
all its hues.
They published the tales (you may want to read them). Mine wasn’t selected. But the joy of writing it was
enormous. So I am sharing it here.
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The tale:
Rik couldn’t swim any
longer. He gasped for breath.
Someone pulled him out.
Ah freedom!
The rescuer tells Rik’s dad,
“Congrats! It’s a boy!”
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ReplyDeleteHey that's great, RGD. Well written!
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DeleteBeautiful and unexpected - the two words that describe your stories best.
ReplyDeleteYou made my day.
DeleteAah yes....the first breath of freedom...loved it. Wonder why it wasnt included. Kudos nevertheless!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sunil Babu for the kind words :)
DeleteYou are producing one beauty after another, lady. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Diptee. It didn't make it to the top 15 entries though. :)
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